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                         Lifeless

     She lay on the ground.
     Alone, waiting for the love that she sought for.
     The agonizing pain of not having found love blazed and   blistered within her like the inferno that so greedily devours the flesh.
     The feeling of agony had consumed her soul down to the delicate, temporary vessel that embraces it.   
     The pain was too much to bear.
     Though now the answer seemed clear
©2004-2010 ~Squegee
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The struggle is over...with no accomplishment

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:icondchevalier:
the picture picture works well with the poem. like chris said, good expression.
:iconsquegee:
Thanks, The poem is about a girl waiting for Love...
The wait was too long so she died of a broken heart.

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The highest courage is to dare to appear to be what one is.
:iconstrichopher:
Nice expression.
It feels very sad, and very still. The picture is a nice capture, and the manipulatons are well done.
:iconsquegee:
Thanks:)

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The highest courage is to dare to appear to be what one is.
:iconethanquin:
Nice, and very expressive.
:iconmr-slippery:
I started to comment on an earlier display of this. How did you do the effect?

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Enlightenment is in a 12 pound sledgehammer.

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